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Tuesday, 6 May 2014

The Hanging Tree: Final Cut (with annotations)





The Hanging Tree Annotations

Below are the annotations you can see in the video for The Hanging Tree.
We used these to analyse and evaluate our final product.

0.05
This is a close-up, tracking shot of the gnarled tree root. This establishes the diegesis of the film but also sets the slow, eerie emotion of the whole trailer.

0.13
This expressionist high angle puts the character in a position of innocence and vulnerability foreshadowing the event of her disappearance and the reaction of her peers.

0.21
Though this is part of the seemingly happy slow montage sequence, there is the connotation of imminent danger due to the presence of the brambles/creepers. As the plants surround the area in which the characters are, it connotes the feeling of isolation and entrapment.

0.39
This shot is part of the flashback sequence of the trailer where the desaturated colour design clearly indicates these shots are set in the past.

0.44
This extreme close up of the Victorian psychopathic killer creates discomfort for the viewer. We feel we are in her personal space, creating an uncomfortable sense of claustrophobia. Even though she is the antagonist of the trailer, this shot forces the audience to interact and even sympathise with her.

0.49
In this shot, low key motivated lighting was used, creating dark shadows which connote fear of the unknown, mystery and death.

1.01
The canted angle in this shot suggests a feeling of disorientation and unbalance. This creates drama and suspense.

1.03
This extreme close up on the eye of the male hero holds the direct address of the audience, making them feel uncomfortable. This gives the impression he is watching them and that they are to blame for what’s happening.

1.13
This low, expressionist angle gives power to the male hero who is racing across the screen. At the same time, it hides his identity. This helps to create a sense of mystery. However, at the same time, the shot is eerily beautiful and the artistic feeling is something we really wanted to convey in our trailer.

1.17
This extreme point of view close up shot of the foliage whizzing past the male hero’s face as he rolls down the hill creates a sense of drama and action.

1.20
This high, expressionist angle of the female antagonist standing of the unconscious male hero puts her in a position of power and dominance.

1.22
The white, distorted typography in this shot suggests innocence and purity. However, due to its distortion and fade effect it gives a ghostly quality as well. The text therefore becomes a metaphorical representation of the psycho killer.

1.24
This expressionist high angle looks down at the naïve victim (Nicole) covered in blood, emphasising how vulnerable she is. The use of body horror makes the trailer more dynamic and vulnerable.

1.32
Using an overlay of two shots created a disorientating effect, manufacturing the illusion that the extreme blood loss has seriously affected Nicole’s balance.

1.40
During this shot the vine winds around the ankle of the female victim (Nicole) and this relates back to the entrapment with the brambles/creepers as well as reinforcing the link between the “hanging tree” and the antagonist.

1.44
The low key lighting on the lake creates dark shadows that appear to reach out towards the character as she emerges from the water, gasping for breath. This suggests that the antagonist has some form of control over this dire situation.

1.52
Extreme low key lighting (almost to the point of back lighting) emphasises the bark-like texture on the antagonist’s skin, reinforcing the idea she is connected to the tree at the start of the trailer. She is also holding direct eye contact with the audience, creating an unsettling feeling as well as a striking and memorable last appearance.

Tuesday, 18 March 2014

Practice Trailer


This is the trailer that we made at the start of this unit of work. we started to get a loose understanding of shots pace and music for this project. 

Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Rough Cut Horror Trailers: Group Feedback






Scores: 6,7,7,8,8,8,9,8,8,9,8,9,8,7,6,10,8  


WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?


       Narrative is good as is the link to historical context-more interesting
      Was well freaked out
       Music & everything!!
         The music was amazing
       I liked the tree wrapping around the leg
       The hanging scene was really good
         The music was well fitted to the trailer
         The use of text
        The storyline looks really good
       Restricted narration at the end
        The moving plant wrapping around the leg
       This was increadible!
       The writing worked really well
         I loved the fact you told a story and as an audience we could understand and follow it
     The music is really good and effective!
         The bit with the lamp is also good
      Basically loved all of it
        Falling down the hill
     Music is good
         Good cinematography
      Text in between is good
       Good song
         Narrative
       Twig round the leg bit
         Nice flash back
         Rolling down the hill
        Moving tree and hill bit
       Music choice
        Clear narrative
        Revolving pan shot in the woods
        Vine grab thing
        Music
         Flash backs are cool
      Music
      Liked when the lady was hung, looked real and scary
        Music
     Falling down the hill
         Music is great so are the costumes
       Hanging was cool
       Really good well planned shots
         Good set and costume
         Use of music
       Good storyline
    Different variety of lighting
         Use of multiple camera angles
      The tree wrapping around the leg
         Narrative
   Picks up pace
        Song has title of film in
        Sound track, although it could develop into other music
   Narrative was good
         Really liked soundtrack
      Understood narrative well
         Liked the ivy vine effect.

Things that could be improved in our trailer

·         Could possibly add some jump scares
·         The light in the tent is on then in the next it is daylight (needs to be dark)
·         Too up beat soundtrack (maybe a little too much suspense)
·         More stuff needs to happen later in the trailer
·         People running around dragged out too much
·         End scream could become a jump scare
·         A bit of action may help
·         More pace
·         Maybe a little bit less talking
·         Didn’t like the spinning, made me feel sickie
·         Tent scene was dark then light... Didn’t work.
·         See Nicole at the end so we kind of know what’s happened
·         Maybe change text (font)
·         Needs a shot on the jump scare not just music?
·         More close ups and quicker shots.
·         Jump scare maybe needed.
·         Music may need to change
·         More jump scares
·         Dialogue a little louder
·         Needs a visual jump scare
·         Dialogue needs to be louder
·         Dialogue needs to be a bit louder
·         Less shots or shorten duration of running shots
·         Too slow
·         Dialogue bad quality/ too quiet
·         Needs more action